Peer-Critique
1. Who were the sources?
The sources were mom and dad.
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
This story is showing the love of Marry Tello and the love of Hector Tello. It tells the audience how they met and how they fell in love.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
There are 18 paragraphs.
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
There are 827 words in this story.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
There are 7 direct quotes.
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
There are two different people quoted in the story
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
"Don't fall in love when you first see the person. Because you may end up getting your heart broken. And if you get your heart broken, move on...."
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
It is located in the middle of the story.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes, it described the day Hector decided to ask Mary to marry him.
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
It could have been one of the close friend's of the parents.
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer? The story is objective.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
What was their first date like? How long did they wait until Hector asked Mary to marry him?
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
When Love Struck
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
This story is a very heart-warming story. I really enjoyed reading it. It shows that there are fish in the sea. And you shouldn't always be looking for love, it will come and find you, just be patient.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
95%
The sources were mom and dad.
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
This story is showing the love of Marry Tello and the love of Hector Tello. It tells the audience how they met and how they fell in love.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
There are 18 paragraphs.
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
There are 827 words in this story.
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
There are 7 direct quotes.
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
There are two different people quoted in the story
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
"Don't fall in love when you first see the person. Because you may end up getting your heart broken. And if you get your heart broken, move on...."
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
It is located in the middle of the story.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes, it described the day Hector decided to ask Mary to marry him.
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
It could have been one of the close friend's of the parents.
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer? The story is objective.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
What was their first date like? How long did they wait until Hector asked Mary to marry him?
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
When Love Struck
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
This story is a very heart-warming story. I really enjoyed reading it. It shows that there are fish in the sea. And you shouldn't always be looking for love, it will come and find you, just be patient.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
95%
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